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Batman OC profile: Corrosa (planning for Fanfic)

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Corrosa

Real Name: Coralline Marie Coppers
Sex: Female
Age: 28-35
Occupation: Professional Criminal
Based in: Gotham City
Mental Diagnosis: Sociopath, Depressive
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Race: Asian
Height: 5 ft 3 in
Weight: 130 lb

 Being an utter genius in chemistry and epidemiology, a bullied school girl named Coralline Coppers was pushed to the edge of insanity when she watched her mother brutally abused and killed by the Penguin’s men. She vanished from Gotham after such planning her revenge on those who have treated her unfairly, specifically Oswald Cobblepot. She was severely trained and mastered in Japan where she full-filled horrible trials in order to prove her dedication to her warrior cult. The trials so-called “damaged” her mental status to even more deterioration. Now Corrosa is back in Gotham trying to deliver her revenge, the only one standing in her way from killing anymore people is Batman.
 Corrosa’s violence, intolerance and disregard for anyone and other criminals makes her a very difficult enemy, along with highly corrosive viles and gasses she throws and triggers dynamically. She is a torture expert and trained nearly to perfection and is surprisingly very strong and fast with one-handed weapons such as axes, bats and swords. It is hard to understand her next move, her mono-toned voice and gas mask makes it difficult to get any emotion. However, her bipolar anger is an easy switch and she will change from content to hostile and screaming in a matter of seconds if words are not chosen wisely.

• Motivated by grief and anger for her mother.
• One of Batman’s most physically challenging enemies.
• Uses a famous gas called “Phantom Compound” that creates a simple phantom itch in the host and as they progress in scratching, the scratch will cause them to scratch their throats or brains out.
• Her high school days were quiet and she was once a sweet, coy and lovely young girl, she is famously known for being a disturbing example of “corrupted innocence”.
• Speaks fluent Japanese
• Incredibly strength

Physical Appearance

 Corrosa looks young and has reasonably cute features. She is petite and foreign looking, it isn't hard to tell she is of Asian descent, when she is actually Japanese. Her body is short and curvy, and she doesn't have a gap between her legs. Corrosa's body is built in her legs and arms, she does not have a six pack that can be seen, but when flexed it shows. Corrosa has a large bust and hips, and slight love handles. She is not tooth pick thin or fat, but is rather buxom and plump.
 Corrosa's face is overall cute and baby-like, she looks very young when first glance. Her hair is naturally jet black and hangs long and straight above her hips. On occasion she will have yellow streaks. She has fringed bangs that go straight across her forehead, just above her eye lashes. Her eyes an auburn brown, and her skin is a slight tan yellow. Corrosa never usually wears make-up.
 Corrosa's clothing changes when she is in costume or not. When not, she prefers loose covering clothing, such as knitted sweaters or dress shirts, denim pants, sneakers and she is often seen wearing a tie. In costume she wears a a one piece black and yellow suit with a hood made of retardant material to avoid fire and if ever she spills her corrosive material on herself. There is a large belt strapped around her torso that holds straps of corrosion viles to throw. She also has finger less leather gloves and belted black leather boots with yellow belts. Her hair is usually maintained the same as always, however her costume and trademark is finished with a gas mask. She always wears her gas mask when attacking to avoid her own poisonous and corrosive chemicals, and when communing or taking it easy she wears her goggles on her head and her gas mask dangling on her neck.

Weaknesses

-She is human, so she is vulnerable to all penetrations of skin, diseases and poisons that are breathed in, she will die in time.
-Her suit is lightly armored.
-She is too reckless and her anger often leads to her defeat.
-Has a lot to learn in hand-to-hand combat.
-Small legs make her a slow runner.
-Has low stamina



Dr. Young Notes

Coralline Coppers being my most recent patient to take on has been showing no effect to treatment. Her current status is defiant and unmoving. Coralline’s life before her criminality was a student at the local high school with her mother, who died more than 8 years ago. She herself disappeared for many years and was presumed dead. Coralline was an honors student, and had extraordinary marks in Science, especially Chemistry which rivals my own, perhaps even greater. She has seemed to put her expertise of biochemistry to use as it is now her most famous weapon choices. I have lost count of the guards in the facility who have stories to tell of the never healing burns and scars from Coralline’s acids, not to mention her compounds. Of course, she now goes by the name of Corrosa, which is no doubt common in this city. Ever since her return she has practiced a life of crime as an art form, starting with theft and burglary charges, then to extend to torturing and murdering three civilians. Threads of her other murders remains unclear. Her psychosis is nothing out of the box for me; she seems to fit around here quite well. Yet her crime and lack of narcissism as the rest of the personas in Arkham Asylum is something not too familiar. Coralline’s murders are not quite serial killer, these kills are not random nor are they for some kind of ransom. Three kills were individual civilians she seemed to know earlier in her life, in fact if I put the puzzle pieces together properly, I’d say this was an act of revenge. It is the fact she is determined to end her last target, who is by all accounts Mr. Oswald Cobblepot, a famous yet undecided criminal.  I have dug up as much information as I can on the three victims taken so far, who defiantly knew Coralline in the past. I just don’t see the reason why she would want any of these people dead.  Coralline, however, denies any help whatsoever, and usually defies me with persistent silence to block out my questions. I am determined to crack this egg; however, this phase soon breaks after my experience with young patients. Whatever she may be afraid of is the key to her rehabilitation.


Trials
1. Corrosa had to rip all her nails out one by one with pliers, in order to prove her commitment to endure pain from her enemies.
2. She had to drink elephant blood at a crowded dinner holding all the wealthy families of the warrior cult known as “Winter Breathes”, and couldn’t show one emotion of distaste or disgust or she would fail and would be ejected from training; killed. The blood was said to reveal strength, and intolerance to weakness
3. The third trial was said to be Corrosa’s most challenging one, where she had to sleep in a pit full of needles for a whole night.
4. The 4th was to kill the leader of the “Winter Breathe Cult” and become their new leader; instead she declined and killed everyone in the cult for revenge and self-defense, including her aunt, who was the one who brought her to Japan and introduced her to the cult.

3 Murders (in Gotham: where she met Batman for the first time and was taken to Arkham Asylum)

1(2).  First torture and murder was right when Corrosa got back to Gotham, she kidnapped her lead bully and tormenter all through high school, Eric Weaver, who scarred her for life in 11th grade after beating her puppy (and only friend) to death in front of her house. Along with all the more torment (before the bullying he was one of her first crushes) he infringed on Coralline, she also kidnapped his current girlfriend and dragged them both to a hidden shack in the woods. To torture him mentally as he did to Coralline, she decided it would be fitting to beat his girlfriend to death in front of him as he did to Coralline’s dog. After she killed Eric’s girlfriend, she proceeded to torture him with a whip and when he was finally begging for her to kill him, she strung mangled Eric up to a tree outside for the wolves to eat, which they did.
3. The second kill was inflicted on the lead thug who came to Coralline’s house the night her mother died, and was the thug who raped Cori's mom as well. Being more adept now with chemical acids, she decided to chain him down to a bath tub (with his head still remaining out of water and mouth taped) and pumped a strong melting improvement of sulfuric acid into the water. Corrosa stood there and watched him die slowly until he was dead.
Haven't submitted anything in a LONG time, thought I would submit my planning notes for the new OC I am making for Batman, she is an antagonist and a nasty piece of shit. :iconheplz: Once again another psychopath, (this is Batman we are talking about) and this time made her as evil as you can get. This fanfiction will be an origin story and will be based near the events that happened in Arkham Asylum, the Batman Arkham video game series I should say. I am planning it right now and this is what I got, BTW, this story will be posted on here AND Fanfiction.com and you should know it is going to be packed with morbid violence, darkness, swears and intense torture, so if you're into that kind of thing, feel free to read. It is going to be a very dark and nasty story telling how even someone as innocent as the young girl who sits infront of you in class, can turn into an absolute monster with no mercy for life.

Here is some fanart for her >> [link]

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I actually love her as avillain good appearance awesome cult and no activity love it can you check out mine
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